‘Enough is enough’ said I, to my dreams,
Those words deep in my ears, in head, echoing,
All is wrong or had gone wrong,
Or I tried the wrong first leaving,
No time or opportunity to do the right
O glad I am in one way,
I know myself more than I imagined.
Will I ever fit into the matrix out there?
I am afraid I will not.
The strong want to believe,
It is all over in the words I read,
And here I lay wounded,
But not bleeding a drop.
Will I ever be able to stand up?
Like those old times when I fell,
I am just not only too old for you,
I am too old for my own conscience too.
Beautiful but sad piece. I think you should trust your heart. As you know, sometimes there are shades of gray.
well the guy that i did like i really don’t like much nemore now……..he i see more as just a friend but im really digging my best friend more and more now and it’s ahhh crazy and he knows that i like him and all and ahhhhhhhhh w/e i dk maybe i should try to move on from him or soemthing maybe that is a sign i dk hahaha
Nice! I love the ending. Kaboom!
You are probably your own worst critic regarding your voice. We all are.
Send me an mp3.
lisa
Wow, deep!
Hhhmm…The age of which innocence and good will are shed…That’s what the last line reminds me of…Yes, thanks for the comment. I am veery happy about it. So…What’s wrong on your side? Are things turning out badly? I’m sorry about the Packers. I don’t know much about sports, but still…Chin up Mr. Poet. With a brighter attitude comes a brighter future, even if it may not seem any brighter to others. It’s the attitude what decides the day’s outcome. (By the way, I like your music a lot!)
You are, of course, ALWAYS welcome to comment on my posts! Never ever worry about that. I love hearing from you! I’m sorry that I don’t always reply back…lots of times my xanga runs are really fast and I don’t have lots of time, but I will try my hardest to change that.
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Last stanza pierced right through me.
Ouch.
Very moving. Ugh.
~ X {will go sulk now….}
i loved it! amazing!!!!! also, thanx for the comment
<33 shirin
enough…
is never enough. (or maybe it is, but it sure doesnt think so. it just keeps on coming.)
if this is a way to smile in adversity i will.. all GEORGIA school are shut down monday and tuesday due to gas shortages. the state cant afford to pay for gas to run the buses, so we get to stay home. so i will smile for that, if there is nothign else to smile for.
-faE
I love your poem. it describes lonelyness to the maxxxxxxxxx.
i wish there was an answer for the most simplest of dreams or situations… but unfortunetly it doesnt work out that way…
🙁
but it is an inspirational poem for the hopeless.
about my poem…you said i could split the last line into two lines and at first i did but then when i wanted to title it something about 4×4 verses it didn’t work to have four verses all with four lines except one….so eventhough it is a bit unwieldy i really want to keep the pome at four verses, four lines each. about your poem…wow. i like it a lot. i like the first line, really grabbed my attention…and the last verse is very powerful and moving. an amazing poem!!
all lot of that captured what i’m feeling now but wasn’t able to find the words for…
daisy
i guess you found them for me.