Wonderful day that went away in a pace I wanted. WOW I never had a day
like this in a long time. I am all relaxed now. These are times when I
really layback and remember good and bad times and say, “It’s all good
man”.
When I write in these times, I write with arrogance in mind. I
am a very arrogant person. If someone have a feeling that I am a very
polite soft talking man they wrong you are.
I am.
Short Tempered,
Aggressive,
Optimistic,
Walk on the thin line between sanity and insanity.
I will be,
Me.
I want to be.
Remembered by at least one person.
I write because.
I want to make at least one person feel good on every day.
But what kinda writing comes out. That depend of what I deal with. Here
is another poem written out of a feeling of Anger. Artificially created
anger. Because I know what will come out of it will be this.
Wonderful Gems.
Glittering like wonderful gems,
Even when darkness in depth penetrates.
In every look giving a feeling of compassion,
The determination of a beautiful soul shown,
In the eyes of yours my enchantress.
Time may wrinkle your skin,
Some of your sense may fail,
Even your eyes may fail to see,
As time with age wraps you to oldness.
O no time will take your love from your eyes,
No age will wrinkle the beauty of you heart,
As its your love that shows in all glory,
From your eyes on every moment of yours,
And I and everyone who see know that well.
O this lover of yours who see that well,
Can only say shut your eyes not now,
To the love of mine and take away,
That glory and glittering from my eyes.
You’ll be remembered by me… always and forever…
Love the poem, it has a great theme to it =)
-Emily
I really like the line, no age will wrinkle the beauty of your heart…. love it … at 53… those are the kind of lines to remember thanks for the nice comments.
I agree that line is just perfect. Hope u r well.
±TBR±
You’re writing is gorgeous. It has so much imagry and personification in it, which makes it so worth reading. Don’t worry, just giving random props. 🙂
Subscribing to you, hope you don’t mind. — Starr
oohhhh that was sweet and sad, and… beautifulll… i actually almost started cryinggg… that was really really really good… that was… amazinggggg……
emilyyyy
I like the part that goes
“shut your eyes not now,
To the love of mine”
Great work. Peace.
“I write because.
I want to make at least one person feel good on every day.”
That is a great reason!!
-Gia:)
hey… thanks a lot for all your comments..
they always make me smile…
can you do me a favor?
can you go to Greendaybabe368’s xanga… and give her some comments..
because shes like.. my best friend.. and she’s like.. really bummed right now…
and your comments always make me happy…
thanks a bunch… ^_^
<3 Jessica
I’m so glad that you had a great day. I wish you many, many more. I enjoyed the “I am” piece even if it was just in preface to your main entry. And somehow I did picture you as soft spoken & mild. Nice to hear your strength. Anger is an important response, for it means we care & are passionate about the subject matter.
This “Wonderful Gems” piece is truly a gem. Are you back yet from your trip?
Hey this my new site.
-Sydnie
i see jess told you to comment me…thanks by the way….
Not a prob…
-Emily
hi there… i rili like this entry… and that’s another amazing piece up there… i rili like the line where it says, “O no time will take your love from your eyes…” that would be so wonderful if this glitter still exists b/n u and the person u loved the most when u reach the golden age…
nice poem im back i havent been on in a while cause of school
WTF! lol screw the knew site lol im going back to this one!
-Sydnie
Happy Wednesday My Sweet Riaz~
May this day be blessed for you and your family. Happy “Middle” of the week. Hugz…Kimmie*