My whereabouts must be kept secret for security reasons…hehehe… truly. The reason…. mmmm… that’s another secret. There is only one xangan in recent times who had seen me. Oohlahlah…. what a wonderful person she is.. came to me at the airport and told hello LP… and said I am Oohlahlah..
Now I am at the verge of being lost… there is only one who can save me.. that’s myself. I don’t know what makes me think that way, well that’s the way I am thinking now. I will let you know the results soon.
The Pledge.
Middle of all with a hungry soul,
Thriving for the touch of all,
The existence of this soul, none feels,
Oh’ insanity may be an exit with blessings come.
An alley step by step passed,
Howling from all corners heard,
The one whisper for which yearns,
Only silence from that corner came.
Why would you leave me in eternal pain,
Why not leave a feeling from far I can love,
Oh’ your silence in the heat of pain melts,
My heart like a candle in altar stands.
The howling stopped and wayfarers left,
Mongrels scavenging trash cans from one time meal,
When walking by those growls, once more pledged,
Die with a hungry soul or with fulfilled love.
That’s a beautiful pledge my Dear friend, I hope the result makes you happy and carry you in the wings of Love. Luv
Nadia
That’s beautiful.
Sometimes silence is for the better.
And I really like the imagery in this. A lot. Well done.
How does it feel to be back in the states recovering from jet lag?
Beautiful. I liked this line the best: Oh’ insanity may be an exit with blessings come.
Sounds like lyrics. Put this to soft rock, or screaming rock. Would add beat and vitality to it.
Ah, forgot to mention – try replacing one of the ‘alls’ in the first two sentences with a different word. A little too repetitive.
I too see both sides of the issue with the second amendment. On the one had it is a constitutional right yet on the other guns hurt people.
Hello, LP! You’re back!! And weaving more wonderful words in your winsome way. Hope all is well. Just returned from 2+ weeks vacation– far away from phones, internet, etc. Your pal, Lah
hahahah! that mus be nice na to met her on the airport! m imagining the moment and feeling great! 🙂
Oh! this one is lovely poem. I prefer words as compared to silence, atleast in some moments.
Bless You! ~Namaste~ Nidhi